Blog Post #2

How did you respond to the feedback from your initial proposal? What will you change in your second round of sketches that are due soon? 


            I took the feedback as constructive criticism and applied the necessary changes. I will change the placement of the text so it flows with the magazine better, and utilize white space so parts of the magazine don't look isolated.

        

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